Story is pretty good but when making a comic like a fanfic I suggest you follow the rule of show don't tell to make it even better. Draw what is happening instead of writing it all down that way it feels more smoother and easier to comprehend.
Story is pretty good but when making a comic like a fanfic I suggest you follow the rule of show don't tell to make it even better. Draw what is happening instead of writing it all down that way it feels more smoother and easier to comprehend.